Preliminary Exercise
Two friends mourning together in silence
This photo shows two friends sitting close together, sharing a quiet moment of grief. Even without words, you can feel the support between them through their body language and how they lean toward each other. The black‑and‑white filter adds to the mood, making the scene feel heavier and more focused on their emotions instead of the background. The eye‑level angle keeps everything honest and simple, almost like you’re witnessing the moment in real time.
How this could've been improved? A softer light source could’ve made the emotion stand out even more
Commentary on decisions I made during shooting: I moved in close, so their hands and faces were the main focus, since that’s where the emotion really shows. I kept the framing simple and didn’t try to over stage anything. The black‑and‑white look helped keep the mood serious and took away any distractions in the background.
Friends holding hands with snowman
This photo shows two friends smiling together while holding a little snowman statue. It is a light, happy moment that really brings out the Christmas spirit. Their expressions and the way they’re both holding the snowman make the picture feel warm and genuine. The close framing keeps the focus on their faces and the statue, making the joy in the moment easy to see.
How this could’ve been improved: Slightly brighter lighting or a cleaner background could’ve made the colors and details pop more.
Commentary on the decisions I made during shooting: I framed the shot so both friends were visible, making sure their emotions were the main focus. I kept the mise‑en‑scène simple so the viewer could easily understand what happened without any distractions.
How I could improve: A closer shot of the board could’ve added more detail and made the game outcome even clearer
Student sleeping on the couch




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